How to Write a Winning Essay for College Scholarships

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Tips and techniques for writing great essays for awrds in writing contestWhen writing an essay intended for winning an academic award, the goal is to make it stand out dramatically and gramatically from other entries. The bottom line is need to win that scholarship or grant award, so there is no room for second best writing. Many awards and scholarships for higher education simply require that you play a certain sport, or participate in certain activities or organizations. But certain scholarships and awards for higher education require that you submit a well written essay capable of beating the competition for the top prize. These essays are generally held to much higher standards, than a typical college admissions essay. There are thousands of applicants submitting in hopes of winning, so your essay must stand out. The grammar, spelling, sentence structure, organization, and content of your essay must be unique and eye catching.

Follow Essay Contest  Rules and Regulations

Rules, regulations, and guidelines are meant to be followed. Essay writing contests are very competitive, so therefore very strict about participants strictly abiding by their rules. Don't give them a reason to place your essay in the rejection pile after all your hard work in research and writing. Essay judges and readers become very fickle and aggitated if they see even the simplest of rules ignored. They see this as you not caring about what they consider important for the essay. If you're required to site sources in your essay, you must include them or face disqualification.

Deadlines Are Set in Stone

Usually there is no real difference between submitting your essay weeks in advance and sending it by express mail on the last day. An office assistant will put your essay writing in the pile for your readers, all the same. The advantage of submitting your application early is that if there is a problem, you might be contacted early enough to be able to correct it. The advantage of taking extra time is that you might need it to improve your essay.

Know the Values of the Organization Giving the Scholarship

It is essential to learn what the institution values and then to demonstrate in your submission for the essay writing contest that you support those values. An essay about you should show that you either exemplify those values already or aspire to achieve them through some aspect of your life and work.

How to Stand Out Above the Competition?

1. Do more research than the competition. When the topic involves yourself, make sure that you get the circumstantial details correct: is that castle at Lake Bled really 900 years old, and is it really on the eastern hill? If you are writing about a personal experience, engage in some honest introspection to truly understand and account for your thoughts and feelings. 2. Write more drafts than the competition. As your experience develops and your style improves, you will gain a more intuitive sense of what structure will work best, so you will not have to go through all the permutations every time.

Step by Step How To for Writing the Essay

With a visual work first glance and first impression is everything. With a written work meant for judging and critique, your title or headline is everything. If it's not captivating, your essay might get passed over. Even if you  think the body of your essay is not compelling enough, your title must be.

1. Usually it is not enough to name the subject of the essay in the title. It is especially important to go beyond the general theme in competitions where all contenders are responding to the same prompt. Give, in addition, a sense of the argument of the essay.

2. Write as specific a title as you can without going on too long or emphasizing only part of the argument. Remember that whatever you promise in the title it must actually come through in the essay.

3. Consider using some of the words (or synonyms for the words) of the prompt, but do not simply restate the whole prompt, unless you are specifically instructed to use the prompt as the title of the essay. Even so, if you are submitting several essays in response to different prompts, make sure that the titles clearly suggest which essay goes with which prompt.

4. Presenting a promise often engages the reader. Titles that begin with "How" or "Why" promise that you will explain something worth understanding. Similarly, presenting a question in the title is basically a promise that you will provide some sort of answer in the essay.

5. A common practice in writing titles is to give two versions of the title separated by a colon.

The Introductory Paragraph

The introductory paragraph of any award winning essay not only capture the reading judge's attention within the first five seconds, but must convey to them what the rest of the essay is about. Just as a summary highlights the main parts of a story, a winning essay introduction details about what the subject will cover. In other words, make sure the first few sentences have the wow factor .

Mood. Be certain to set a mood or tone for your essay. Its very tempting to play the hard struggle and sympathy angle, but be careful, a winning essay should not cry of attention seeking or extreme melodrama. Remember a winning essay can also be upbeat, such as detailing an anchievement or helping to improve the lives of others through generosity and selflessness.

Content. Just as in the title, the content of the first sentence should be preparing the reader to learn your perspective on your topic. This means, again, choosing a level of specificity that is not too broad. Get right to the issue.

Language. Remember that early drafts of your first sentence should be just enough to get you started as you write and revise.

Remember that early drafts of your first sentence should be just enough to get you started as you write and revise. Later, when you have a solid command of your argument and a perfect feel for the tone of your essay--this may not be until after you have written several drafts--you can spend time focusing on the first sentence. Don't get bogged down before the rest of the essay is in place.

The Body

The body of an outstanding scholarship or award essay has the same features as outstanding essays in general. Remember that each body paragraph should be a discrete unit with a clear point, taking the next reasonable step as you proceed through a consistent line of argument.

Dealing thoughtfully and intelligently with counter-claims and counter-evidence is often essential to award-winning essays. Readers want to know that you have considered your position carefully. This includes demonstrating that although you have considered other positions, you remain persuaded that your position is the strongest. The following advice also is essential for essays in which you do not take a position but present a variety of possible claims in order to demonstrate your knowledge or interest in a particular issue.

When you treat any claim that is not your own, especially a counter-claim, present it fairly and, as much as possible, on its own terms.

At the same time, pay attention to the relative amount of effort that the essay expends on your position versus the other positions. Usually the majority of the essay should focus on your own position or opinion, so do not get bogged down in refuting other positions at length. Likewise, do not worry about responding to every potential challenge to your position; it normally is quite enough to include your responses to the best and most significant challenges that could be offered.

In covering the ground of your own position, make sure that you use various sources for evidence such as a quotation from a credible third party. Do not cite a second-rate source, including most encyclopedias, dictionaries, newspaper articles, popular magazines, and most of the material on the Internet. Even a strong Internet source is suspect among readers, simply because it shows that you did your research from the relative ease of your computer rather than at the library. Whenever you can, find a published source (usually a book or journal article) to cite in place of an Internet source.

It ought to go without saying that your evidence also should be (1) relevant, (2) interpreted thoughtfully and accurately, and

(3) appropriate.

(1) Relevant evidence is that which pertains to the particular point being made in the paragraph if not also the entire argument of the essay. When you are searching for and choosing from among relevant pieces of evidence, look for phrases that are memorable and which use some of the key words that are used elsewhere in your point or in the overall argument.

(2) Accurate interpretation of evidence involves understanding the evidence in its larger context as well as in itself. Thoughtful interpretations also bring out the importance of the quotation in its new context, the particular location in your essay where the evidence is brought forth.

(3) Evidence is appropriate when it has the right length (not too long or too short given the amount of weight that it carries), the right tone (objective, combative, or whatever is necessary for you to illustrate or develop the point), the right source (a trustworthy rather than a suspect source), and the right form (in some places it makes sense to quote a speech or lines of a poem, but in other places only written prose will do).

Although the evidence in the body of your essay often will come from sources that you quote and statistics that you cite, some evidence may take other forms. Winning essays often rely on a wide variety of relevant and appropriate evidence. For example, sometimes the outcome of a minor line of argument becomes a piece of evidence, that is, one of the premises of your major line of argument. Sometimes your own observations are the most important evidence, such as in essays that describe your own experience or achievements (including many admission essays as well as reports on your own scientific experiments). And sometimes your evidence is so obvious or commonplace that it need not be cited, although it might be essential to your argument, such as the idea that Einstein revolutionized Newtonian physics with his theory of relativity.

The Last Paragraph

In a short admission essay, the last paragraph often should do a lot more than sum up the essay. In contrast, in a long academic essay the body paragraphs tend to lead the reader to a kind of plateau, followed by a "conclusion" with a markedly different feel: the reader knows the essay is ending. In long essays, the conclusion can consist of two or three paragraphs or even as much material as an entire admission essay. A successful scholarship essay, often having a length between that of a short admission essay and a long academic essay, exhibits the best of both kinds of conclusions.

In other words, a strong scholarship essay does not need to make the conclusion do the double duty of providing additional content and providing an ending statement at the same time, which is characteristic of a very short essay. Yet the conclusion of a scholarship essay should do more than simply sum up what has been presented so far. Likewise, a strong scholarship essay seldom needs a long concluding section. Most of the points to score have already been scored by the time the conclusion begins. Instead, consider the conclusion as your opportunity to move your readers from the plateau of your argument to the best place they should visit next. Remember the metaphor of taking your reader on a trip: from the plateau, you and your reader are best positioned to see the overall landscape and to make a decision about the next step.

The summary in the last paragraph should be clear, but some kind of intelligent, witty, perceptive, motivational, or otherwise interesting further remarks also should appear. What kind of further remarks you choose will depend on what seems most appropriate to your particular essay.

In Summary

1. Get the reactions of one student or peer reader and one reader above that level (a teacher, parent, boss, or professor). Best of all, try to find an authoritative reader who has the similar tastes with your intended audience. Ask them to comment on strong and weak points of your essay.

2. Read your essay aloud to catch typos and, more importantly, to hear the tone and flow of the essay. Read it to someone, and have that person read it back loud to you. Remember that the reader of your essay will read as the essay looks on the page, not the way you imagine it sounding in your head. Even so, note that one of the judges might read individual lines or sentences out loud to persuade other judges that your essay deserves to win (or to fail). Make sure that your worst three or four sentences are still readable. Just as important, make sure that your best three or four sentences are memorable and are prize-winning.

 

Comments 

 
0 #7 raul 2010-08-08 20:26
You can win a lot of financial aid money writing scholarship essays. If you have the time and the patience, enter and write t as many essay contest as you can. remember that there are many thousands of dollars available by different groups, and some are easier to win than others. Some practically take no work. You just have to research them and apply to as many as possible. The essay writing process for scholarships only get a little harder as you apply for really large awards. But every year billions of scholarship money go unclaimed because no one applies for them. Go get yours.
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0 #6 Selita 2010-05-15 13:54
For many students, writing a detailed essay is an intimidating experience. They think about the smart students they might be up against and lose faith in their own writing abilities. The fact is 80% to 90% of the students who apply are students who are good at creative writing, but mostly regular students. You have to realize that most of them have already entered previous contests and didn't win so they are trying again, their first attempt wasn't good enough. You a first time essay writing contestant can use this information to your advantage. First thing you need to do is put your fears and doubts about your ability aside, put your mind to it, and start writing with common sense, passion, and focus on an overwhelming circumstance in your life that you had to overcome, write about something unique and extraordinary that you can do to change or improve the world for others.
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0 #5 mini-mimi 2010-05-15 13:40
The preparation and organization you put into writing an essay for a scholarship essay contest can increase your chances of winning, particularly if you get lucky and get to compete against students who are way less prepared than you are. Essay contests are very competitive so you must be in your best shape mentally to get your creative writing juices flowing. There is no room for mistakes in grammatical error, out of context paragraphs, misinformation, or misstating facts.

For students wanting to enter essay contests for scholarships and grants, but don't know where to find them. There are a few good websites that regularly posts updated essay writing contests for awards.

Two sites are:
Scholarship Hunter(http://www.scholarshiphunter.com/freesweepstakes.html)

Scholarship Lotteries
(http://www.finaid.org/otheraid/lotteries.phtml)

Your chances of winning scholarship awards through these essay contests also depend on the amount of students who are competing against you. Judges keep records of where the contestants live. If you are from an area with a record of winning contestants, your chances of winning against hundreds of others is much greater because judges will weigh the fact that your region tend to produce great writers. It's also true for the opposite. If you're from a region or town with a record of losing contestants or bad writers period, essay contest judges also take that into consideration. If you've entered other essay contests previously and judges know about this, it tend to work in your favor. They see that you are serious about it and truly want to win. if you've never entered an essay writing contest, there's a learning curve so your chances of winning are a little harder.
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0 #4 Sydney 2010-05-02 10:43
I wrote an essay once in high school for a $25000 scholarship award, and honestly I think it was the most proof read and edited writing assignment I've ever had to do. It took me two weeks to get all the kinks out of it, and I give my English teacher a lot of credit for helping me get it right. I eventually submitted it with my fingers crossed and waited to hear what the judges decision were. It turns out I was the chosen winner and it had to be one of the happiest days of my life next getting the news that same year that I had gotten accepted to Stanford. Writing the essay was very exciting at first, but it got very frustrating midway when I realized just how much editing and rewrite had to go into it. My English teacher wasn't satisfied with three drafts that I wrote so she had me do it again and again as if she was one of the judges from the judges from the organization making the decision to choose the final winner. I eventually realized that even if I had not won the top prize, I still would have had a shot at second or third prizes in the writing contest. It helped that I wrote an essay that had a lot of passion but very truthful relating to my personal struggles and using my life experience to help others less fortunate than me. I lived in a really urban and rough neighborhood so there was plenty of material to talk about relating to struggle.

If you're competing in any type of essay writing contest for an award, don't focus too hard on the prize because then you might do what my English teacher called overwriting, meaning you get too wordy and add in too many unnecessary details that don't flow well with the main idea of the writing assignment. Good luck to anybody who has to do any type of essay writing for awards.
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0 #3 canadiansnowbunny 2010-03-26 13:17
Quoting lowrider:
I heard a story on the news last year where some young lady wrote a book about 4 million dollars in scholarship money or how to win all that money. Does anyone know what I'm talking about, I'd really like to get that book, I'm applying to as many open scholarships and grants as I can. They say that's the best strategy. Apply in Volume. You have a better chance of winning a few that way. I hope my essay writing skills are good enough for them though. :sad:


I don't know anything about that but I know that up here in Nova Scotia last here, some girl name Carolann Mroz won a crap load of scholarship money in the hundreds of thousands to cover her college expenses at Wharton Business School at the Ivy League University of Pennsylvania. That's some good change man. i bet her parents are smiling right about now. I'm sure she had to have had some killer essay writing skills to win all those scholarships.
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0 #2 lowrider 2010-03-26 13:13
I heard a story on the news last year where some young lady wrote a book about 4 million dollars in scholarship money or how to win all that money. Does anyone know what I'm talking about, I'd really like to get that book, I'm applying to as many open scholarships and grants as I can. They say that's the best strategy. Apply in Volume. You have a better chance of winning a few that way. I hope my essay writing skills are good enough for them though.
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0 #1 phatbottomgirl 2010-03-26 13:09
I wrote so many essays for scholarships and grants during senior year of high school. Out of about 11 essays I wrote I actually won a scholarship award for $5600. That pretty much covered some room and board for me at my college. There's so much money out there but it seems kinda hard to get even though they say billions of dollars in scholarship money go unclaimed every year. I doubt it that all this money is divided up into large lump sums every where. Each scholarship seems to be a little here a little there, some with all kinds of weird conditions like you have to be a certain height, have big feet, be short, have tattoos, be related to a member of some group.

That's probably why so much of it go unclaimed because not everyone can apply for every scholarship. Does that make any sense to anyone?
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